Another spur of the moment things.
....And I really need to find better titles
Showing posts with label Effervescent. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Effervescent. Show all posts
03/06/2011
Friend fiction
Effervescent ~ A Tribute~
Chapter 1: Setting off!
Inside the shining wind
The wings of a dream descend
Have courage and fly to the future,
So beautiful
Chapter 1: Setting off!
Inside the shining wind
The wings of a dream descend
Have courage and fly to the future,
So beautiful
08/04/2010
Effervescent Saga: The Rise of the Machine, ch 06
The trio is separated again. Kai to the west, Yust to the north, and Al to somewhere else.
Will they able to accomplish their own mission? Please enjoy the sixth chapter. Kai's story, and so the war begins >:D
~Alceus
29/03/2010
Effervescent Saga: The Rise of the Machine, ch 05
Two chapters at once. I'm deciding to use The Rise of The Machine for the sub title since this is what it's about.
Please enjoy the 'first' chapter of the main plot.
~Alceus
Effervescent Saga: ch 04
Forgot to post the next chapters.. Sorry about that..^^a
there's not much in chapter 4, but it's still necessary. it's the final chapter of the 'opening' and the preparation for the next chapter, which will enter the main story.
I hope you can enjoy it..
there's not much in chapter 4, but it's still necessary. it's the final chapter of the 'opening' and the preparation for the next chapter, which will enter the main story.
I hope you can enjoy it..
~Alceus
24/03/2010
Effervescent Saga: ch 03
I did a little change to the old ch 3. so I have to repost this chapter. actually it's only adding what I originally want to use as the prologue of ch 4 to the end of ch 3.
~Alceus
21/03/2010
Graduation
"Friendship is unnecessary, like philosophy, like art... It has no survival value; rather is one of those things that give value to survival."
- C. S. Lewis
Last Days
© Laarnie Simbulan
Moving on and meeting new people
Seems like the most interesting thing
New buddies, new galpals
A whole new world to explore
At first, tears never came and overflowed
All there was was excitement
Laughter, amazement and gladness
For the final year in high school's about to be uncovered
But during the last days, things changed.
Memories and good times of the past shone,
Clouded our minds as we thought of leaving
While all the emotions altogether brewed.
All of a sudden, tear-floods overflowed, unmanageable.
Rivers of crystalline tears mixed with sobs,
Reminiscing the past seemed to be hard.
To grasp the thought was unbearable.
"Why do I cry?", I asked.
I always wanted to leave, didn't I?
"Can't wait to get out of here" were my initial words
But why and why now are my questions.
Sadness creeps in and heart full of sorrow
As I sat with clouded eyes, still crying.
Nothing will be lost, I thought.
All's well. I'll look forward to tomorrow.
All of these are foolish things to say.
Foolish...fooling myself is what I'm doing.
All the friends and teachers that I've known
Cannot be replaced in any way.
Sure, new experiences will come.
But will these outshine the old ones?
Love and understanding have grown for five years.
Hard to comprehend why it's all ending.
Life goes on, they say.
But now all I want is life to be as it is.
Joy fills my heart in this place.
Nothing more to ask for, I prayed.
Goodbye...goodbye...final goodbye
In these last few days of woe and sorrow.
Tears mixed with laughter echoes in the halls
As the cover closes in the final days of this chapter.
- C. S. Lewis
Last Days
© Laarnie Simbulan
Moving on and meeting new people
Seems like the most interesting thing
New buddies, new galpals
A whole new world to explore
At first, tears never came and overflowed
All there was was excitement
Laughter, amazement and gladness
For the final year in high school's about to be uncovered
But during the last days, things changed.
Memories and good times of the past shone,
Clouded our minds as we thought of leaving
While all the emotions altogether brewed.
All of a sudden, tear-floods overflowed, unmanageable.
Rivers of crystalline tears mixed with sobs,
Reminiscing the past seemed to be hard.
To grasp the thought was unbearable.
"Why do I cry?", I asked.
I always wanted to leave, didn't I?
"Can't wait to get out of here" were my initial words
But why and why now are my questions.
Sadness creeps in and heart full of sorrow
As I sat with clouded eyes, still crying.
Nothing will be lost, I thought.
All's well. I'll look forward to tomorrow.
All of these are foolish things to say.
Foolish...fooling myself is what I'm doing.
All the friends and teachers that I've known
Cannot be replaced in any way.
Sure, new experiences will come.
But will these outshine the old ones?
Love and understanding have grown for five years.
Hard to comprehend why it's all ending.
Life goes on, they say.
But now all I want is life to be as it is.
Joy fills my heart in this place.
Nothing more to ask for, I prayed.
Goodbye...goodbye...final goodbye
In these last few days of woe and sorrow.
Tears mixed with laughter echoes in the halls
As the cover closes in the final days of this chapter.
18/03/2010
Effervescent Saga: Ch02
Alright. 3 chapter in a day. I can't really sleep and I ended up writing these ch0 to ch 2 in a night. but since Lenneth, who proofreading this fanfic didn't say anything bad about the quality (at least not in the story, although she said my grammar sucks T_T), so I only did some minor change to these 'instant' chapters.
Anywah, please read the next chapter. Also please leave a comment that will help me improve my skills of course. No spam, no flame. After all, I'm still a newbie in this fanfic world.
Anywah, please read the next chapter. Also please leave a comment that will help me improve my skills of course. No spam, no flame. After all, I'm still a newbie in this fanfic world.
~Alceus
Effervescent Saga: Ch01
The first chapter is here!
I'm using Suikoden 3 format for this fanfic, where the story is seen by different point of views for each chapter. while the main character for the story is Alceus, but the 'real' main characters is the Effervescent itself (for those who don't know, it's a name of a ring/guild in Indo ECO), just like Suikoden's 108 Stars of Destiny. And the main character in this chapter is not my character, it's my friend's instead.
Hopefully you'll enjoy this chapter too..^^
I'm using Suikoden 3 format for this fanfic, where the story is seen by different point of views for each chapter. while the main character for the story is Alceus, but the 'real' main characters is the Effervescent itself (for those who don't know, it's a name of a ring/guild in Indo ECO), just like Suikoden's 108 Stars of Destiny. And the main character in this chapter is not my character, it's my friend's instead.
Hopefully you'll enjoy this chapter too..^^
~Alceus
Effervescent Saga: Ch00
Author: Alceus
Co-author: Lenneth
Story Type: On-going
Okay, Here I am, trying to make a fanfic based on an MMORPG called Emil Chronicle Online.
These characters are 'real' and can be found in Sakura Server of Indonesian ECO.
Disclaimer: The copyright holder for each character here is their own player, and the NPCs, of course belong the creator of ECO, Gung Ho
You can say this is my first time creating something like this, but I hope you can enjoy it. ^^
ps: I don't know what to use for the title, so I may change this after I find a more suitable one.
Co-author: Lenneth
Story Type: On-going
Okay, Here I am, trying to make a fanfic based on an MMORPG called Emil Chronicle Online.
These characters are 'real' and can be found in Sakura Server of Indonesian ECO.
Disclaimer: The copyright holder for each character here is their own player, and the NPCs, of course belong the creator of ECO, Gung Ho
You can say this is my first time creating something like this, but I hope you can enjoy it. ^^
ps: I don't know what to use for the title, so I may change this after I find a more suitable one.
~Alceus
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